Sunpaw and Fawnpaw of WindClan

Name: Sunkit Sunpaw Suntail
Clan: WindClan
Rank: apprentice
Age/Gender: 7 moons/ tom
Mother: Blackfrost
Father: Breezefur
Siblings: Fawnpaw, Gorsepaw, Heatherpaw
appearance: Sunpaw has a bright rusty orange pelt, and some might call him a Somali cat. He has bright green eyes and a white tail to accompany his pink nose. He is very leanly built and has long slender legs that go along with his tiny paws and long tail. Sunpaw has his dad's short pelt.

Past life: Not much has happened since Blackfrost got accepted into the clan and Sunpaw and Fawnpaw where born. They have lived normal apprentice lives, except one time they ran into a fox when hunting together. They had to fight off the fox as best they could before there mentors reached them and finished the fox off.  Sunpaw and his siblings where always bullied as kits because of their mothers past, but it didn't really faze Sunpaw. They still get pushed around by the other apprentices

personality: Sunpaw is a calm, mellow kind of cat. He doesn't get fazed by anything and never talks. He is that cat that observes  from the back and only joins in when everyone is freaking out. He only talks quietly to his mother, father, or siblings and no one else. He is very caring and thoughtful, and is always making up the plans. Sunpaw is always solving the problems, and never creating them.

skills
hunting: 7/10
fighting: 5/10
tracking: 6/10
swimming: 1/10
running: 9/10
stamina: 7/10
herb knowledge: 1/10
memory: 3/10
strength: 4/10

Name: Fawnpaw Fawnpaw Fawndapple
Clan: WindClan
Rank: apprentice
Age/Gender: 7 moons/ she-cat
Mother: Blackfrost
Father: Breezefur
Siblings: Sunpaw, Gorsepaw, Heatherpaw
 
appearance: Fawnpaw is a solid white with a few streaks of light grey in her pelt. She has a very wirily build with a long body and long legs to go along with her short tail and big paws for her size. She has black ear tips and striking amber eyes. Fawnpaw also has a pink nose.

past life: Not much has happened since Blackfrost got accepted into the clan and Sunpaw and Fawnpaw where born. They have lived normal apprentice lives, except one time they ran into a fox when hunting together. They had to fight off the fox as best they could before there mentors reached them and finished the fox off. Fawnpaw and her siblings where always bullied as kits because of their mothers past. They still get pushed around by the other apprentices, and this really bothers Fawnpaw.




personality: Fawnpaw is a very independent cat that counts on no one for anything. She would much rather be alone then have to work with other cats. She can be a bit snappy at times, but only when she's in a bad mood. Fawnpaw is usually very cheerful and sweet, unless you hurt her siblings, then she goes full on rage. Fawnpaw thinks she has to get everything right, and hates when other cats mention her mothers roots. She believes she has to work harder, just to prove she isn't anything like a rogue, so she works herself to the bone.

skills:
Fighting: 6/10
hunting: 9/10
running: 7/10
swimming: 1/10
tracking: 5/10
climbing: 4/10
memory: 8/10
herb knowledge: 1/10

Sunpaw is almost accepted, but you should add more history. That short of a history should only be acceptable if it's a kit.

Same with Fawnpaw on her history.

fixed, I believe.