Breezefur of Windclan

Name:
Breezefur
Age//Gender:
59 moons  // tom
Clan//Rank:
 Windclan//Warrior                      

Sexuality:
Straight
Pronouns:
He/him
                             

Personality:
Breezefur is rather patient and wise. He isn't much of a talker, being rather blunt when it comes to talking. He would rather just talk to his mate then to anyone else, being very distant from them.  Breezefur is loyal but he doesn't act it- commonly being questioned due to bringing a pregnant rogue into camp. He is snarky and aggressive to the rest of clan and it wouldn't be behind him to try provoke fights.
Appearance:
Breezefur's pelt is a kind of tawny-brown colour. His fur is very short although it gets slightly hard to bare in winter, having to fluff his pelt up all the time. His fur is covered in darker ticking-most prominently on his back and tail. His chest is much lighter, his chin is almost white and his body is lean yet muscular. His eyes are a bright, lovely green.
Short Description
A ruddy tom with a darker back and green eyes.                              

Family:
Snake-ear-father-deceased-Battle-wounds.
Blueflower-mother-deceased-Old age.
Rushkit-brother-decreased-Still-born.

Relationships:
Blackfrost-mate-alive and well.
Sunpaw-son-alive and well.
Fawnpaw-daughter-alive and well.
Heatherpaw-daughter-alive and well.
Gorsepaw-kit-alive and well.                              

Skills:
Fighting-7,  hunting-2, swimming-0, running-8, climbing-5, herbs-4, memory-6,logic-6 and stamina-7
Other:
                             

History:
Breezekit was born to a ambitious warrior and a silent queen. Blueflower was old when she had her kits and died shortly after Breezepaw became a apprentice, Rushkit was born still-born because of his mother's age. Breezekit never talked to anyone as a kit-some cats believing he was silent like his mother. His father died when he was a apprentice at one point although Breezepaw didn't care that much since his father never talked to him. Soon after he became a warrior. Once again nothing happened until he met Shadow, a beautiful black rogue she-cat. He befriended her and warned her of the clans. She refused and kept coming to hoping to see him. Breezefur fell in love with Shadow and eventually, she began expecting kits. Breezefur was worried about the kits and convinced her to join the clan. Breezefur talked to the leader, giving a speech and they let her join. She became Blackfrost and gave birth to a litter of four-Sunkit, Gorsekit, Fawnkit and Heatherkit.

Having a soft spot for rogues makes no sense, though?? Rogues are literally cats against clan cats. It wouldn't be reasonable for him to have a soft spot for just rogues, but maybe for Breezfur because of Her personality or looks etc.

Secondly, cats' fur does not grow slightly longer during the cold, but he may fluff his fur up.

Finally, the skill set records much too "skill-full" because you have three that are 9/10. Lower two of them down.

All edited!